Front page is quite sleek and easy to read- text is integrated well on the LHS. Could use a stronger font type for the artist and use a third colour or some other pugs symbols on the front for variety Contents- this needs a bit of work- the layout is very basic and by having such a large image it makes it too similar to the front cover and reads more like a poster. Go back to the codes and conventions of a real contents page. How many pages are in the mag- seems like not many. Hard to read the text with the brick background and the fact you haven't cropped or manipulate image in any way shows minimal skill in ICT and photography
Double page- This is effective- I think you need artist name more clearly to promote him and the CD cover image takes up too much room- a CD would be square shaped not oval/ I like the production image and the captions are well phrased but long and hard to read. name of mag/page numbers etc also need to feature.
Front page is quite sleek and easy to read- text is integrated well on the LHS. Could use a stronger font type for the artist and use a third colour or some other pugs symbols on the front for variety
ReplyDeleteContents- this needs a bit of work- the layout is very basic and by having such a large image it makes it too similar to the front cover and reads more like a poster. Go back to the codes and conventions of a real contents page. How many pages are in the mag- seems like not many. Hard to read the text with the brick background and the fact you haven't cropped or manipulate image in any way shows minimal skill in ICT and photography
Double page- This is effective- I think you need artist name more clearly to promote him and the CD cover image takes up too much room- a CD would be square shaped not oval/ I like the production image and the captions are well phrased but long and hard to read. name of mag/page numbers etc also need to feature.