Luke, as discussed,all images need to be your own and there should be a minimum of 4 across the pages. The front cover is taking shape- I think the crown idea looks a bit cartoon-like so am not sure that fits the style and genre of the mag. Maybe have an image to go with the straplines/coverlines? Contents page at the moment is a little basic in terms of layout and there needs to be more than 30 or so pages. Make sure the name of the mag is branded throughout and think of ways you could segment the info. DPS is getting there- a few codes and conventions missing e.g. page numbers and drop caps and the font style could link more to the front cover and pick up the red. The captions are hard to read here and the title should have a punchier strapline
Luke, as discussed,all images need to be your own and there should be a minimum of 4 across the pages. The front cover is taking shape- I think the crown idea looks a bit cartoon-like so am not sure that fits the style and genre of the mag. Maybe have an image to go with the straplines/coverlines? Contents page at the moment is a little basic in terms of layout and there needs to be more than 30 or so pages. Make sure the name of the mag is branded throughout and think of ways you could segment the info.
ReplyDeleteDPS is getting there- a few codes and conventions missing e.g. page numbers and drop caps and the font style could link more to the front cover and pick up the red. The captions are hard to read here and the title should have a punchier strapline